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Behold these words, from the mouth of an atheist
Fearless and remorseless in their content, always promiscuous
Words that celebrate beauty, simplicity, and the galore of sex
Words that describe the little joys of life and its complex
Behold the words of a genius, taken from a prophets eulogy
Reduced to limericks, from compound neurology
In these words I emit, courageous naivety
Of the aspiring youth and their lucid obscenity
©2007-2009 ~bRuTal-RomAncE
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something i wrote today...please critique.

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:icondealsian-archer:
I like this, it's got a really wicked feeling to it. I can't put my finger on what exactly it is, but it's a very cool tone.

Great work!

--
Badb ní Morrigu; resident in the Hibernia dorm of *Elysian-Academy

Follow your dreams, for they are the future!

Only she who attempts the absurd can do the impossible.
:iconbrutal-romance:
thanks...im trying to change my style a bit, trying everthing i can come up with. i hope im not that bad in it. :D

glad you enjoyed it.

--
The 7 deadly sins:
•Patriotism
•Homophobia
•Racial Intolerance
•Parental Guidance
•Violence
•rap and hip hop music
•Sobriety
:icondealsian-archer:
You're a fantastic poet, no matter what style you write in!

--
Badb ní Morrigu; resident in the Hibernia dorm of *Elysian-Academy

Follow your dreams, for they are the future!

Only she who attempts the absurd can do the impossible.
:iconbrutal-romance:
you're too kind. :)

--
The 7 deadly sins:
•Patriotism
•Homophobia
•Racial Intolerance
•Parental Guidance
•Violence
•rap and hip hop music
•Sobriety
:icondealsian-archer:
Nope - just honest :aww:

--
Badb ní Morrigu; resident in the Hibernia dorm of *Elysian-Academy

Follow your dreams, for they are the future!

Only she who attempts the absurd can do the impossible.

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